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PostSubject: The Life of Markus: Day 1.   The Life of Markus: Day 1. EmptyMon Jul 20, 2015 2:44 am

Felt like writing. Part 1/2


"Dan, dan, dan, dan, dan, dan, dan" Was all Marcus was saying while he was doing his morning routines. It was a sunday morning, 10:00AM, he was in his boxers, looking at himself while he was brushing his teeth. Puffy curly hair. With Brown eyes, he was tall, 6'0''. He was getting ready for a long day. Marcus was 17. Today was a very special day because him and his girlfriend had hit their 2 year anniversary. And he had planned out the perfect date for such a special day. After Marcus was done with his morning routines he headed towards his room. His room was actually neat and clean. A Queen sized bed, a decent sized desk and a huge closet, that was attached into the wall. He looked through it, finding a pair of khakis and a black shirt that had "Swizzz" on it.

The "Swizzz" was the name of one of the rappers he listened to on his free time. Marcus was probably the only person in his whole school who actually listened to Rap. For some reason he couldn't find people who actually liked the kind he liked. Sure there were people who liked Rap, but most of the time they would say "Eminem" Or "50 Cent" Or stupid ass "Lil Wayne" But non of them were Marcus's rappers. That was one of the reason his girlfriend Mindy, dated Marcus. She loved his love for music. That was the way they met. It was during a house party, and they bumped into each other. Marcus making the first move, Mindy following along, the relationship just sprouted.

Walking out of his room Marcus, headed downstairs to the living room. Next to it was the entrance to the kitchen, and he could hear someone moving around in there. He entered to see his mom in her bathrobe working on her coffee, she was yawning when Marcus entered. "Hey Mom" Marcus said, entering the fridge real quick.

Marcus's mom yawned again moving her hand up and down, she wasn't in the mood to be an actual mom. Marcus on the other hand was looking through the fridge trying to cop a little breakfast before he left. He found nothing. He closed the fridge and headed towards the door. "Mom, ima be back later tonight, im spending the night with Mindy" He said out loud. Marcus's mom mumbled an "Ok" knowing her son wasn't going to be doing anything bad.

The moment he walked out of his door, he got a text, the day was stale. Those mornings where everything is just quiet, and you feel good being awake this early. Just before the sun takes over the land with its heat. Marcus pulled out his phone. It was a text from one of his friends Braxton. Braxton was his best friend.

"Brooooooo, THEY ACCEPTED ME!" Was what Marcus read. Braxton was talking about this Thug Gang that he's been wanting to join ever since they started gaining popularity after hitting the news a couple of times for stealing from the local stores. It wasn't something to get worried about. Braxton was always getting himself into stupid things. Braxton lived a couple of towns away, a couple of train stops away. Marcus used to live back where Braxton lived, and thats how they became friends. Both of them had the same taste in music, and instantly became best friends. Even after moving.

"Lol" Marcus texted. Putting his phone away. Heading for his car. There was something on the side of the door. His car was colored black so he could see it clearly. It was a little red stain, he bent over to take a better look at it, he placed his nail on it and scratched on it. He didn't know what it was. Shrugging it off he got into his car. Turning on his car. He whipped out his phone and texted Mindy real quick. "Hey babe, im coming over" Throwing his phone onto the passenger seat, in silent mode, he started driving towards Mindy's house. In this time, Marcus put on some rap songs, and got lost in the music while he was driving. It didn't take long for him to get to Mindy's house. Her parents weren't home, they were both out together in a business trip.

Marcus saw an unfamiliar car sitting in the drive in, it was a orange mustang. It confused Marcus, because he didn't know any of Mindy's friends with this kind of car. Marcus was confused. Parking in front of her house, he got out quickly leaving his phone in the car, the phone was buzzing, it seemed to keep buzzing as if someone was trying to text him constantly.

Walking towards the Orange Mustang, he looked around it. Noticing something that made him question the very thing. He saw the same red stain. Ignoring it, he walked towards Mindy's front door, turning the front nob. It opened and Marcus could see clothing on the ground. It seemed cliche but he walked in, he saw jeans, and some yoga pants. It led up the stairs where Mindy's room was.

Marcus walked up there slowly, he knew what this was. And he was scared of the truth but he needed to see if it was actually true. He got to Mindy's room fast. And the door was slightly opened.

Creeping up to the door, he opened it slowly, to see Mindy sleeping facing the door, and next to her was a man with black hair, half of his body was showing, he was shirtless, and Marcus only guessed that the rest was naked as well.

Marcus didn't know what to do. He was stuck there in fear. In confusion. This was the first time he had felt this way. And it hurt. And to top it off. Mindy woke up, noticing Marcus standing there looking at her. That was when she realized, getting up her mouth was opened, about to say something, but Marcus was already gone, smashing Mindy's door shut.

Part 1 of 2 End.


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PostSubject: Re: The Life of Markus: Day 1.   The Life of Markus: Day 1. EmptyMon Jul 20, 2015 3:36 am

Nice. Unexpected, but nice.
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PostSubject: Re: The Life of Markus: Day 1.   The Life of Markus: Day 1. EmptyWed Jul 22, 2015 12:28 am

Marcus was out of Mindy's house. Walking past the douchmobile in an instant getting to his car, he opened the door with shier force. Then he stopped. He looked at the Car. And he had an idea. Instead of entering his car he went towards his trunk and opened it. He didn't see anything good enough to smash the car with, that disappointed him. Taking a deep breath he took a good look around the area, trying to find something, but he couldn't. But then the memories started coming back to Marcus. The memories he had with Mindy. And the anger over took him. Slamming the trunk door down, he walked towards the Douchemobile, one of his hands clutched into a fist, his pace sped up, the moment he got into range, he brought his hand up and smashed it against the back window shield. Nothing happened. He brought the hand back up and did it again. Again nothing happened. The anger was too much. Getting into a better position, he brought both arms upwards and smashed it against the window. After seeing it did nothing, he started doing it over and over again. Venting out all that anger that suddenly built up. Finally creating cracks, and finally breaking the shield. The moment he was through, Marcus stopped. both his arms half way into the car. He was breathing heavily, his fists were covered in his own blood.

After calming down he looked at the position he was in. Then took his hands out of the car, taking a couple of steps back as through out that whole time, the car was sounding its alarm. Marcus ran. Running towards his car, grabbing the wheel while his hands were still covered in blood and window crystals, it stung him all over but he started the car and backed out, driving out of the area fast. He looked down at his phone, noticing that someone was calling him. Reaching for it, his hand stung again when he grabbed it. When he looked at the phone the call was gone, and he could see the numerous calls from his Mother. He wondered why she was calling him.

While he stopped at a red light, Marcus moved his finger around to call his mom, blood going through the phones screen. Placing the phone near his ear he waited for his mom to pick up. When she picked up the light had turned green, and Marcus started driving. "Hey Mom" Marcus said, before he was interrupted by his moms sobbing. This caused Marcus to get more concerned. "Mom. Mom whats wrong" Marcus said, He was worried, something had happened. "I-i-Its Braxton.... Marcus." Was all Mom could bring up before she started bawling. Not noticing the rode at this moment too focused on what his mom said. "Braxton? Whats happened to Braxton" Marcus screamed, taking a turn. "He's dead." Marcus's Mom screamed.

The News went through Marcus like an earthquake. Goosebumps went through his whole body as he heard the news. And he blanked out. He dropped his phone, you could hear Marcus's mom sobbing still, asking for Marcus. "Marcus? Marcus?" could be heard. Marcus at this point was driving towards Braxtons town. At high speeds, grabbing the wheel with a hard grip, he couldn't feel the pain anymore. A whole just opened through his heart, a whole so big, and bottomless, that you could fall through it forever.

Day 1: End. Day 2 will be posted when i feel like writing it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Life of Markus: Day 1.   The Life of Markus: Day 1. EmptyWed Jul 22, 2015 11:59 am

I assume the gang killed him?
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PostSubject: Re: The Life of Markus: Day 1.   The Life of Markus: Day 1. EmptyWed Jul 22, 2015 12:00 pm

what did I just read?
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